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Gift - A love letter from T.K.

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This is a gift for my friend *StratosphereRaider :huggle:
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Well, I'm not really a fan of PatamonxKari T.K.xKari ... ^^; Patamon is holding a letter from T.K. and he'll give to her. (Because T.K. is in vacantions so ... xD )
Sorry if Kari Kamiya's pose's weird, but I didn't find a better idea ... XwX"
Well, Hope you like it my friend :huggle:
I only did with PaintTool SAI. :iconpainttoolsaiplz: (I love this software :love: ) it's very simple to use it and you can have some magic effects (luminosity, contrast, .... ) °w°
And sorry if the background is rotten x'DDD

And please, give me critiques... I really need it ... ;w;

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Art © me, :iconaquapatamon:
Kari Kamiya, alias Hikari Yagami © Digimon
Patamon © Digimon
Digimon © Bandai, Toei Anime
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© 2012 - 2024 AquaPatamon
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hello! This is going to be my first critique and I'm excited <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt=":lol:" title="LOL"/>.

And I think you should ignore the star rating. It doesn't really take important place in my critique.

So let's get started.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> I like you coloring style. The techniqie you choose looks pretty good. I think you should try adding textures to the clothes if needed. The girl and the digimon look very shiny, but the light source is behind them <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="15" height="30" alt=":?" title=":? (Confused)"/>.
The hair really needs some work. The hair looks flat. I think you should add lines and some lose hair to make it look more realistic. DeviantArt has plenty tutorials about it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> Second - the anatomy.
Your anatomy could use some improving. The girl's body is small and too thin compared to the head. The shoulders and arms are hanging limply. The rest of the body needs some work too. Anatomy is a hard thing to draw and these tutorial series are great for learning anatomy - [link]
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> The face.
I think that the eyes are very pretty, but they should be way smaller compared to the head. Lashes, eyebrows and ears seem to be missing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt=":lol:" title="LOL"/>.
:bulletgrenn: The backround.
There isn't really much to say since there aren't plenty of objects there. The grass looks kind of weird. Part of it has some sort of texture, part of it is blured.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> I really like the way you drawed the digimon! The shading on him and his expresion is well done.

Overall this is a quite good drawing that need some improving.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletyellow:" title="Bullet; Yellow"/> Tutorial for arms and shoulders - [link]

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletyellow:" title="Bullet; Yellow"/> Face proportions [link]


Sorry if I sounded quite harsh on the critique I'm just trying to help you.